Milton Bertrand
Group 5 Peer Review:
Summary of the Genetic Disease presented in the video.
Albinism is an inherited condition; it is autosomal recessive inheritance pattern. A person must receive mutated copies of a gene from both parents to develop albinism. Due to a lack of melanin it leads to someone having very light skin, hair, and eyes. Melanin is a chemical substance that is responsible for skin, hair, eyes color. It is a rare genetic disease and affects all races and all ethnic groups. It is important to know that albinism isn’t a disease; rather it is a genetic condition. It is diagnosed by genetics testing to determine which gene is mutated to determine which type of albinism.
Assessment of the video:
Organization: The video was organized well. Everyone did well.
Content: Based on the allocated time, the video content was good.
Delivery: Delivery was good; however, reading words for words from the slides was a little bit too much. It is always good to bring new sentences or phrases beyond the slides.
Feedback: addressing the following two questions:
What did the group do very well? Content, organization were done quite effectively. Presentation could focus less on everyone on the slides.
Where can the group improve? Stay away from reading verbatim. Try not to read to the viewers as they can read the materials presented on the slides. Emphasize on sentences, or phrases.
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